Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? support your opinion with examples.
Comfort , time and internal peace are required to make learning efficient. Hence, it is not possible to do job and study side by side. Occupation and education disturb one another. I strongly oppose this statement because handling both these together is easily possible with strong willpower. The following exposition will further bolster my views in this regard.
To embark with, there are a lot of people in western countries, who do part-time study and work full-time. It all depends on the preferences of the individuals. Besides, there is no fallacy in arguing that if they want to bear some hassles and become more productive in their life, they can manage both things side by side. This not only makes them knowledgeable also increase their potential as well.
Probing ahead, there are few parents who cannot bear the expenses of their child's education. As well as, they put their children into some labor so that they can earn money for the family. But it does not mean that the child has to abandon his dream of acquiring education, they can continue their education and work to feed their family.
Finally, sometimes people think that they have completed their education, but when they get a full-time job, they realize that diploma or degree can increase the chances of promotion. Hence, studying and working side by side helps candidate to grow professionally.
To sum up, working and studying is very much possible. It just depends on the dedication and determination of the person. People should do both study and work side by side to make themselves more skilled and capable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Comfort , time and internal peace are required to...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'helps'' or 'help's'?
Suggestion: helps'; help's
...ence, studying and working side by side helps candidate to grow professionally. To s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, hence, if, so, well, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97752808989 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59689429725 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4354939767 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132892173905 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483171827952 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529156350091 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811834327981 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499568692882 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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