Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment? Agree or disagree.
the important effect of learning Which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial with many people claim that it is beneficial while other reject this nation. The sustainable influence of students have no time for study has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent year.It can be agreed positive and negative impact of this trend in upcoming paragraph. This essay will be elaborate students and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons students life but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that students have no time for study. As an illustration, student are double minded in recent years. Furthermore students are studying 8 hours in their institute and thus want more time for their practice.
Nevertheless according to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of student life, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that mostly student are earn money for own life and its bad habbit for their daily life
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of student life is prominent student achieve there goal by spending a more time on study should be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04784688995 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59368100473 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.870519802 50.4703680194 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.714285714 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806460754944 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407411876036 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031402070372 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511712562125 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315706168963 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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