Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
This goes without saying that, there are different types rules and laws, which are applied in different situations. Some laws are imposed by goverenment and some are by social people. Some people belived that human behaviour is change nowadays because of law. I whole heartedly disagree with this notion. There are different reasons to impose the law.I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. The first and foremost idea to justify my view point is that the onus is on the government to impose the rules and laws beacuse of human. In this era, people something do wrongly then it is the responsibility to reduce any kind of problem that is why government applied law. For instance, a person take precarious drugs and something do wrong near their surrounded, then its the responsibility of the government to ban the drugs and improve the habit of taht kind of man who is taking drugs, then the behaviour of human is automatically changed. Subsequently, if people do not follow the rules and laws which are imposed by the goverenment then government should take strictly fine imposed to those man who do not obey the laws and rules. If people follow the laws thn they automatically change their behaviour and live happy life. To conclude, it can be reiterated that if government should impose laws because of human, if human react in right way then there is no need to apply the laws and also there is no need to change the behaviour of the individual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are different reasons to impose the law.I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...ng do wrong near their surrounded, then its the responsibility of the government to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76587301587 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6615922761 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7930735875 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288600530345 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126595871782 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869001652266 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288600530345 0.151781067708 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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