In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. discuss and give your own opinion?
The important effect of facilities, which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of facilities has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent year. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational and this essay further elaborate my reasons for forming the positive effect of this trend and thuis will lead to be a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are numerous reasons facilities but the most conspicious one stems from the fact that techers teach in the cities. As an illustration students profession high in the cities as compared to rural areas.
Nevertheless according to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelem the potential influence of facilities, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that teachers sent to rural area and get ganed high school education. For instance student proffesion depend on techers.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of facilities prominent although the way in the age of student people esaily learn anything should be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...the cities as compared to rural areas. Nevertheless according to some people there remain s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, nevertheless, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 185.0 242.827586207 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25405405405 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83108075856 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3994035855 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147134533453 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523988067417 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423919908545 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857558177857 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389887816063 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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