Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lost with globalisation or its significance will increase with globalisation?

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Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lost with globalisation or its significance will increase with globalisation?

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YOUR ESSAY

Our world is becoming closer with the advent of globalization. Some people say that the importance of English language will increase with globalization. In my opinion it will increase so let us discuss this burning issue in the following paragraphs before jumping to conclusion.

To embark with, English has become a language which is accepted globally. Its value will increase as the globalization increases as it would be easier for people to communicate and understand each other. Moreover, people will not face any problem while traveling in any part of the world as this language would be spoken by every person in the world. Adding more, less discrimination would be their on the basis of language. For instance, considering our nation, people who are expert in English are welcomed in every field.

Furthermore, no translators would be required for any official deals. this may decrease many misunderstandings as sometimes the translator may not interpret the message in the same emotions the speaker so this may increase the problems. In addition, this language would be mandatory in every school as the first language so that they dont face any problem in the future as of now lot of people spend huge amounts and time on learning this language because there is no space for any human in corporate sector without knowing this language.

To conclude, the importance of this language will increase with the globalization as this would be the common language for the whole world

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13095238095 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84544286527 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5288613436 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251138167841 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113887051453 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932892566627 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158601407218 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10030584258 0.0609392437508 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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