Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree.
Environment is polluted by multiple factors in which most important is massive usage of fossil fuel, increased population and destruction of forest.In my opinion, these problems are rectified by individual as well as government to make environment unpolluted. The following paragraphs would elucidate possible reasons along with suitable examples.
To commence with, individuals can put their effort to minimize the pollution.Firstly,people can use public transport instead of private vehicles. For example, Electric train is best option to people who commute to office.Secondly,people can use electronic message system such as E-mail, Facebook, Twitter to replace papers.As a result, deforestation will be decreased.
Adding further to reasons,Government can enforce strict norms and rules to make the environment real green.It has to spend more proportion of amount in national budget for public transport.Consequently,less usage of cars would decrease the usage of fuel.Secondly, campaign awareness programs will educate the people about ego-green.I would like to cite an example of GO-green programs can be conducted in public places.
To recapitulate,there are myriad factors are intended in environment pollution but to resolving the issue is in individual and government hand.Hence both of them should forward their best foot towards to curb the menace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89243795129 2.71678728327 143% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675126903553 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.551516969 50.4703680194 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 20.9669160288 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.25397266985 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144473983276 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614207018125 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317393590955 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796196731732 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118279797054 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 12.6369458128 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 53.1260098522 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.11 11.5310837438 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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