Younger employees have more skills, knowledge and more motivation than older employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree, support your argument with your own experience.
Recent days, younger employees are almost spread across all over the professional fields across different domains. Basically hiring authorities are hiring employees based on their skills, knowledge and experience, whereas younger employees do not meet the experience extent in some ways. I firmly agree that older employees are well in experience than younger employees and following paragraphs will explain my view point with suitable examples.
To commence with, there are multifarious factors are favour with older employees experience. Firstly, experience plays a vital role in professional field as an experience person can complete a task within short span of time with his knowledge and skills. But in case of younger employees cannot because knowledge comes by experience. For example, a survey conducted by Work Force Institution from New South Wales reveals that the demand in experience person in software industry is increased to 90 percentage.
Furthermore, experienced employees look after a job security and they never jump into another company. As a result, dissatisfaction will not be ruled in employees thought. At the same time, minimum experienced people will look into another company for salary hike and other benefits. For instance, a research conducted by Professional Body from India described that more percentage of younger employees are migrate into another companies compared with experienced people.
To conclude, it can be said that, skills, knowledge and motivation all will come along with experience. Therefore, experienced people are indispensable part in every growing company in terms of profit and growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'migrated'.
Suggestion: migrated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70161290323 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93793930893 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2685929595 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244232687856 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886477435777 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724042458766 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140859855857 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056889505389 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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