Environmental responsibility for business and commercial organisation. Should they take owership?
Recently, a phenomenon of preserving environment has stirred a debate around the world. A myriad of national and international organisations are taking various steps in saving the environment. Many people believe that saving an environment is conspicuous for the upcoming generations, whereas many believe otherwise.In my opinion, companies should also take responsibilities to preserve the environment. This essay will further illustrate both sides of the arguments and finally lead to a conclusion.
To commence with, today, it is irrefutable to ignore the role of companies in the societies. Commercial organisations and businesses use a colossal amount of natural resources from the surrounding environment. It has been observed that they not only mint money from available resources but also pollute the environment. For example, in India, many hotels and factories release the chemically laced water in the rivers which has deteriorated the ecosystem of water resources. Therefore, saving and preserving the environment should be an utmost responsibility of the organisations.
Furthermore, many organisations run a Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) program to help and flourish the environment. Some of the CEOs are also contributing and donating money to retain the natural resources. Moreover, the governmentshould also enforce guidelines and give a tax rebate to the companies. For instance, TATA, a famous conglomerate spend a humongous amount of money and runs various CSR programmes such as Clean Air Management.
To conclude, as per the points outlined above, every company and the business houses should take the moral duty and ownership to save and preserve the surrounding environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75590551181 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43285414327 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0605889563 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267052999567 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745837490332 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688797752554 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154975034712 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503441845568 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.9458128079 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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