Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. what is your opinion.
some people think that experience is more beneficial than theory knowledge and formal education. in my opinion practical knowledge is greater than theory education. I will explain my point of view in my stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, i can offer a variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these, experience is the thing we done already and already know the results of any things. there is vast different in experience and book knowledge. A primary example is my grandparents know many things in compairesion of my mother and father so every time my grand father suggest the best way to cope with situation based on experience.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view is formal education is also very essential part of our education. Without education we can not do any thing in our life it's like a candle without light. After born children start their formal education in school and they gain knowledge from school. Firstly we know theory knowledge then we are able to apply it in practice.
Finally after taking aforemention point of view from personal perspective i am inclined to belived that experience and formal education both are two part of one coin we need both of them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82790697674 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65739127624 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6960276522 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159631817099 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736615120696 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917119275746 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101313622369 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735154795945 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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