Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
These day, multitude of critical issue are being debated all over the globe and a massive upsurge in the use of internet in our daily live make better in comparison to past. I will explain the key point of my stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, i can offer variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these, internet playing vital role in these day with network we can send message from one country to another country. we can live video chart with our relative and family. A primary example of internet are my husband live in japan we always talk with each other with the help of internet and we feel closer to each other.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are in past there are no any types of communication method. People do everything them self by foot that consumed a lot of time and person was watt for long period. A secondary example of communication in ancient period was rich person send their message with with the help of servant. If that individual died in way that message was not rich to their receiver.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point in to consideration from my personal prospective I am inclined to believed that net make our life more easy in comparisons to past and also make fast this topic is more malleable in these day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
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These day, multitude of critical issue are being ...
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...er in comparison to past. I will explain the key point of my stance with the help...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... argument and instance. To begin with, i can offer variety of argument to suppor...
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Suggestion: We
...ge from one country to another country. we can live video chart with our relative...
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... country to another country. we can live video chart with our relative and family...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... my point of view are in past there are no any types of communication method. Peop...
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...types of communication method. People do everything them self by foot that consum...
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...riod was rich person send their message with with the help of servant. If that individual...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... message with with the help of servant. If that individual died in way that messag...
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...al prospective I am inclined to believed that net make our life more easy in comp...
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ke fast this topic is more malleable in these day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57983193277 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48777818987 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584033613445 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5071578429 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0469232061707 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0178119872228 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244075857119 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034616367153 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210962334791 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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