Extreme sports (Dangerous activities) like skiing, bungee jumping, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of the idea of preventing of doing dangerous sports and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate among the populations. Although these sports are beneficial as they regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that they can be plus as they could develop some brilliant aspects for their adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several disadvantages of diminishing or even cancelling the exterme sports. These reasons are rooted in the fact of enhancing the excitment. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the benefits of these sports. Firstly, an array of settlers prefer doing them due to the high level of excitment. In particular the youths do love the abnormal activities with all their risks. Furthermore, many scientists assereted that it is occasionally necessary to do unusual tasks in order to enhance the self-confidence.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, loads of citizens argued that the extreme sports should be forbidden. They have the opinion that if the equipment and facilities that should necessary for doing them is inadequate or inefficient, some catastrophic occurrances might be happened. According to reseach undertaken by a prestigious world-renowned university 30 per cent of damaged people who had accidents in performing skiing, bungee jumping, rafting and diving were dead immediately before others have the chance to go take them to the hospitals.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of extreme sports are far more outweigh of their demerits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43636363636 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14011317373 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643636363636 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.789389937 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163382104447 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456666206928 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502878118737 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875343836555 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646552766568 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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