Fair trade coffee is seen as a way of compensating farmers fairly for their produce but a section of people believed that the premium price of fair trade coffee is not justified as most of it is spent on fair trade marketing and advertising campaigns. what is your opinion? do you support fair trade coffee and believed it is beneficial for farmers?
These days, multitude of critical issue are being debated all over the globe and massive upsurge in the premium price of fair coffee trade is not justified as most of it is spent on fair trade marketing and adverting campaigns is most controversial one. I will explain key point of my instance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, I can offer variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these in coffee trade farmer invest more money and their hard work to produce coffee. Farmer is the person who very hard work in any condition whether there are too much hot, cold or in sunny weather. Farmer have right to get their fair trade coffee is seen as a way of compensating farmers fairly for their product.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are in coffee trade person put their great effort but they didn't get more benefit from coffee trade and premium price of fair trade is not justified as most of it is spend on fair trade marketing and advertising which make farmer in loss. A primary example of coffee trade are in illam there are more tea planting for planting tea tree they invest more money after 6 month man and women pick tea and send to factory. Factory make further process to prepare coffee.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point in to consideration from my personal perspective i am inclined to believed that farmer should pay money fairly because they are the person who work very hard in comperiasion of others employees so fairly justified them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
... person put their great effort but they didnt get more benefit from coffee trade and ...
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Suggestion: spent
...trade is not justified as most of it is spend on fair trade marketing and advertising...
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...sideration from my personal perspective i am inclined to believed that farmer sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68773234201 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40653422443 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1655099165 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514938637159 0.242375264174 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189053313544 0.0925447433944 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202531333039 0.071462118173 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308581213574 0.151781067708 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881983129629 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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