Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
In today's hectic life, fast food has become an important part of our society. Prepaid or fast food saves lots of preparation time and easily available in every nook and corner of the city across the globe. In this essay, I will cover its impact on human life and how we can reduce the dependency with the fast food.
To begin with, it is irrefutable to say that most of the people nowadays eat fast food as it is easily available and cheaper. Modern lifestyle has changed in the recent past and purchasing power of the people has increased and fast food is easily available. Fast food outlets are mushrooming around and selling cheaper food. Like Pizzahut, KFC and McDonald are the names of few.
As per researchers, in the USA more people consume fast food and becoming obese. Studies show that more than 50% of kids are suffering from obesity and another type of health-related issues like cancer and diabetes. Fast food includes MSG which is a taste enhancer and creates addiction slowly. It also impacts the total household budget, people who cook at home, save more money than who consume fast food. Furthermore, it is not a good practice and should be avoided at any cost.
To sum up, fast food is neither beneficial for health nor pocket. It impacts human life drastically and we must stop consuming it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43678726968 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9303068515 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7857142857 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539834163293 0.242375264174 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186120785711 0.0925447433944 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137405868831 0.071462118173 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32978639938 0.151781067708 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117977895067 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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