high school theatres
The importance of high school theatres with was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notice .The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years .in my opinion; the former proposition appears to be more rational .This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that makes us aware of ritual costumes and tradition. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that importance of sacrifices made by our great leaders in the past to provide us with quality life style. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that sometime gives wrong message to society for example sati movement in which the wife is burned alive along with her husband during the death rituals hence, it is apparent why are in favour of trend According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of high school theatre are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12396694215 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63171239223 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.652032316 50.4703680194 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.666666667 104.977214359 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.3333333333 20.9669160288 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.25397266985 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135663896412 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463616713725 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655672985775 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899769744114 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636780948166 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 12.6369458128 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.5123152709 276% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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