Impact of television shows on society?

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Impact of television shows on society?

Implication of effect of television shows on people’s which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. Let’s talk about the both views of this trend.

At the outset, there are diverse reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one steam from the fact that it is depend upon the people’s that what they want to watch on television. Like there are several shows telecast on television which give the important message to the people’s for example crime petrol. These types of shows put the positive impact on the societies.

Nevertheless some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that television shows impact on society can be addressed with some positive facets as well as there are innumerable facts in favor of that, but the most predominant one steams from the fact that television shows put the bad impact on the people. Mostly there are so many television channels which telecast the serials. And in these serials they give show so many unnecessary things which put the bad impact on society.

The importance of impact of television shows on society can be debated, but the fact remains that there were several factors that lead to this theme and matter. Eventually, according to the above analysis, it can be concluded that it is depend upon the people’s that what they watch on television and what impact that show gives to you it can be predicted that in the near future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, well, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68592311567 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5979090408 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.909090909 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416598462399 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16502788509 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12222239928 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265277460405 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105094060845 0.0609392437508 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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