The importance of the cars and airplane in the modern life. Give examples.

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The importance of the cars and airplane in the modern life. Give examples.

From the inception of an era, human always try to augment and leverage the existing resources to live a better and more vibrant life. To achieve the massive luxuaries life, human is keep investing in technology and science. Consequently, couple of best examples of the success on the technologies are cars and airplane. This essay will elucidate further with required arguments and examples.

There are myriads of examples which can be proved that the cars and the airplanes have decreased the time and the connectivity barriers. The preponderant one is that due to high number of flight schedules, it is lower down the cost to send anything from one place to another as compared to ancient time when people were majorly dependant on ships. Moreover, due to online ticketing option, it have provided the better options and the experiences to book tickets. However, it is helping foreigners, to experience the different cultures around the world as well.

Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that cars helped people to travel from one place to another effectively. For example, if anyone is working in nearby city or state, he can travel any time to their home or place of relative. At the time of festivals, people do not have to wait for the public transport. People living in small cities or urban areas are now more connected with the rest of the world. In short, physical distance is no matter in today's world.

In conclusion, one can conclude that with the help of technology and science, human have invented cars and airplanes which not only help them to stay connected with their near and dear one's, but also it has removed the connectivity barriers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91872791519 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61327906746 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3039821217 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107927387711 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356282093652 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387510428174 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678443102127 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392368830687 0.0609392437508 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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