Online shopping is destroying local business. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regards to this statement. Support your views with reasons and examples.
It is called that 20th centuary is a computer age. We can do lots of daily life things with the help of computer and if we have internet connection so we are connected to entire world with just a single click. From last decades, it has been seen that customer have moved from local market to online market. However there is lots of advantages and disadvantages related to online shopping.
One side users would have lots of options and can compare prices of the things which they are planning to buy but on the contrary some people not only face challanges in order to fake transaction, cheap qualities of products and lots of follow up with customer care in case of return the items.As per my opinion, online shopping is best option because it provide us not only options but alos we can compare the prices of the things which we want to buy. The only thing which user should keep in mind that products which he/she are planning to buy, should be from authectic website, it must be secure and see https in the url where user about to pay to avoid any fraud.
Although it affects the local business but to be with technology each local seller should enhance their horizion and need to thing out of the box. Local business can create their website so that they will not only focus on local customer but also they will get business from the all over the world.
In conclusion online shopping is gift to society. Everyone should try it once and local business should join this new trend.
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This is my first attempt to
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20728311855 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.825129036 50.4703680194 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.4 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170846671863 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081881418233 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660834387678 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114481148208 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458994973772 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.1260098522 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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