importance of work-life balance
The importance of work-life balance has been debatable and sparked controversy over a period of time. We all know that work is part of our living and we usually lost are time with family over these things. Many people believed that balance in work and leisure will help us grow and limits our stress. The following paragraphs will assert my opinions ad deliver the appropriate conclusions.
Firstly, the importance of a balance of work in our life has a great impact on our daily living. She should take time to rest as well as spend time in our families in order for us to relax and limit our stress from work. The time spend with our family is the greatest thing we can give to them so we must balance well our leisure as well as work. For instance, after we are off from work, we should focus our selves in our families. We should be going home on time and don't spend overtime in work as work will cause stress and stress lead to diseases. Moreover, as we aged, our families as well are aging so we spent time and make most of it.
On the other hand, it is hard to achieve to spent more time in our family overwork. We all know that in this society we are facing without our work we cannot function well. Work gives us money in order to sustain us in our daily lives. Most people spend more time at work and do overtime as the salary they have is not enough for them and for their families. For example, if you are the breadwinner of your family you will not have time for a time as you need more work and more money. With the time you spent at work who will have no time for your families.
To recapitulate, work-life balance is hard to achieve to people who are more for money over family. It depends on every individual how they manage their time for work and family. In countries like Australia, work-life balance is a must.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 20.9802955665 248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 347.0 242.827586207 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30547550432 5.00649968141 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20200067731 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432276657061 0.580463131201 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.1803502793 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.6315789474 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297617308623 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136351166882 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144575107309 0.071462118173 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249096769646 0.151781067708 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105285380552 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 12.6369458128 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.5310837438 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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