Some people work for long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
Recently, the phenomenon of hard working has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “is working overtime necessary to achieve success?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that free time is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the employment standpoint, successful career is bound up inextricably with overtime work, which indicates they lead to both professional qualifications and experiences. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between project deadlines and competitions as well as an exponential increase in financial pressure. Their academic criticism was impressive. Researchers, nevertheless, paid heed to employee’s motivation, productivity, and promotions alike. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of having rewarding job is correlated positively with not only full-time employment but also satisfactory performance.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that work-life balance is essential to attain success. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08854166667 5.00649968141 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45214289704 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.765625 0.580463131201 132% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9946932769 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.888888889 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122799330015 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410605781413 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459001760461 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856147090953 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568504770746 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.04 11.5310837438 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.5 8.32886699507 138% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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