With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. What are the measures could both government and individuals take to deal with the situation?
While there is growth in the number of automobile owners, public highways are now comprised due to congestion. However, the administration and its citizen can help solve this problem through laws that would limit the number of car possessions for the former and to look for alternative means of transportation for the latter.
To begin with, the government has an indispensable role in maintaining road conditions. Consequently, they should pass out a bill to control the purchase of such vehicles especially to those wealthy individuals who can easily afford them. Apart from this, banning of old and dilapidated public transports such as buses could ease traffic in roads.
On the other hand, even though there is convenience in owning a car, every individual should still consider alternatives such as to commute or to ride in a bicycle or even walk as a means of traveling if the destination is only proximate to one's home. In addition, drivers must instill much discipline and strict compliance to traffic rules and regulations for them to help reduce road stress and other predicaments that carries with it.
To sum up, sectors of the government should treat this problem more seriously to avoid disrupting the smooth flow of vehicles in roads by promulgation and implementing of laws targeting the control of vehicle ownership. Being greatly involved in the issue, the public must also take initiative and efforts by being practical and applying discipline to oneself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...if the destination is only proximate to ones home. In addition, drivers must instill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, still, while, apart from, as to, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95695683939 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641666666667 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0287989049 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.25397266985 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144695720204 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589472636793 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583355071291 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780242691083 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340947437677 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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