In the past, sports champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude towards sports affect each sport?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In the earlier times, athletic competitions are used to be driven mainly by the objective to attain victory or overcome global records. But today, these events are usually been targeting the monetary prizes and the chance to be popular. This situation have caused the youth to feel for practicality and this thinking has affected the mentality of genuine sportsmanship. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the era of physical activities has proliferated since the historic periods. However, the notion about this have changed through time. Many people claim that gathering the cash prize from winning in a sports contest is what the players are after to. The athletes are behaving this way because of the need for finances without considering the essence of playing itself. Moreover, self-fulfillment also comes in along with the attainment popularity among wide array of audiences. This may be caused by the limelight they get once in the stage of star dome to experience once in a lifetime feeling of greatness and appreciation. To illustrate, car racers are at instant fame together with large amount of prizes obtained after becoming the first placer even though they have been dishonest during the game.
Moreover, the mentality has greatly affected the younger generations as they always look up to their idols in the field of sports. Unfortunately, they may also feel being betrayed as they have expected more superb performance from their teams. However, due to personal gains and interests one cannot truly enjoy the event as their bets did not able to win. For example, the champions of boxing matches are believed to be pre-planned because of secret arrangements for the sake of money.
To recapitulate, eradicating the essence of true sports just to obtain larger sum of money is unacceptable and may also lead to mistrust and dishonesty among the youth. Indeed, it is the primary role of the sports facilitators to showcase real talents of sportsmen.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 31.9359605911 182% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 328.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15548780488 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81240870035 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 139.433497537 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5507689096 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212473792303 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584007396569 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484980153709 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117820876578 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452054504601 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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