Information revolution brought about by modern mass media have both positive and negative consequences to individuals and the society. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Discuss and use your own experience. #24
In the today’s world, modernization technology has revolved around. Modern mass media has active through different media. It may benefit to the some of the individual and society where as it may have negative aspect. This essay will discuss through the positive aspect of modern mass media.
In the 21st century, modern mass media such as television, radio, newspaper has resolved the problem of many people. Many people are curious to know the world’s news by sitting at their home. Mass media are becoming increasingly creative these days that most people are rely on them. For example- technology is developing in a very rapid way. As a result, information about world can be available at home which everyone can connect it.
Despite of spreading the world news through mass media, people has doubt that the information provided may be fake. People who rely on mass media about the information should get satisfaction.
For example- if one media publish the fake news as other media are busy copying that fake news without investing the real news and spreading news through all means of media. As a result, people who depends on mass media for the information may get disappointed.
To conclude, without doubt I can say is modern mass media is revolving information around whole world. In my opinion, it is the fastest and easiest means of transferring news to the world and whole world depends on mass media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... different media. It may benefit to the some of the individual and society where as ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... different media. It may benefit to the some of the individual and society where as it may ...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... the some of the individual and society where as it may have negative aspect. This essay...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...reative these days that most people are rely on them. For example- technology is dev...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one medium', 'a medium', or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: one medium; a medium; media
...ould get satisfaction. For example- if one media publish the fake news as other media ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97899159664 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60094893951 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516806722689 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2282967915 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203245006194 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860929328971 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594224192257 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13253614586 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639494746706 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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