The information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and
has some negative and positive effects on individual’s lives as well as on
society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the information revolution has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "what are negative and positive consequences?" Although communication technology is regarded as thoroughly both positive and constructive by many individuals, I tend to believe that it has some negatives.
From a social point of view, information technology is indeed bound up tightly with family needs, which means it might lead to both social crisis and social changes. For example, a group of reputable social scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between separating families emotionally, family bonds as well as invasion of privacy. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that technological developments are correlated negatively with not only lack of privacy but also family breakdown.
In educational terms, communication technology is undoubtedly attributable to educational issues, in that it would lead to educational achievements, structural changes, and research. A well-known example of such attributions is video conferencing, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken to take educational institutions for granted. Had they protected their profits in advance, they might have had the opportunity to maximise their profits. Thus, information technology could play a significant role in education system.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree with both positive and negative results of information technology. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., the information revolution has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95256916996 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45994549044 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7583440159 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.6 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161719671133 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596736413667 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654396672905 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108665463695 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757663641126 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 53.1260098522 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.53 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.94827586207 216% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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