International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
Globalization has resulted with increasing number of people travelling all over the world. As a result, people with wide variety of culture, different linguistic background started interacting quite often, eventually led to lack of trust and discomfort. Cultural, linguistic and racism issues need to narrow down to overcome the negativity among society.
Travelling across countries has become a necessity for higher educational purposes, better job prospect, expanding businesses and spreading awareness of religious practices. With local community people being more conservative and not welcoming changes has become a great difficulty, eventually leading to intolerance and rigidness. Instances involving theft, harming people and extreme situation involving murder is evidenced.
Local governments across counties has to collaboratively work towards uplifting under developed and developing countries to innovate science and technology. Bridge the linguistic gaps by ensuring foreigners gets accustomed towards local language. Create a healthy business environment, creating jobs for local empowerment accomplishing basic necessity.
Finally, to summarize, travelling across counties has become a necessity in a day-to-day life. Foreigners travelling abroad to meet their aspirations has to understand the local sentiments, work towards society betterment, ensure more local job creation and be one among the locals, while local government has to vital role in uniting people and creating a healthy society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 20.9802955665 5% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24285714286 5.00649968141 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1104716706 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.57093596059 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9045753712 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0700377804296 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268803348801 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243772404594 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436235090089 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258750925428 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.35 53.1260098522 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.91 11.5310837438 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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