Involve employees in decision-making

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Involve employees in decision-making

it is irrefutable to say that, employees are the heart of the company's. We all know the employees must be well taken cared off as they are the one who helps us make a company's work and make a profit. many people believe that employees must involve in the decision making of the company, but other opine and will agree that no need for the employees to be theirs during the company's meeting and decision making. These paragraphs will assert both sides of the argument and an appropriate conclusion will be made.

At the outset, it is believed that companies must include their employees during decision making as employees are more hands-on to their work. For instance, big companies take their employees ' recommendations as well as suggestions in order to make a better profit. Furthermore, good teamwork helps the company achieve its desired goals.

On the other hand, many people tend to argue that no need for employees to involve in decision-making. As for them, it will just create bias in terms of own personal gain. Moreover, it will create a chaotic meeting as there will be lots of suggestions and recommendations to take into it.

To recapitulate, involving employees in decision making outweigh the opposite. companies must take into consideration the employee's voice in order for the employees to stay longer as for them they are valued.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, as for, for instance, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84533874974 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5683916353 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439938083406 0.242375264174 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189387367054 0.0925447433944 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191493087478 0.071462118173 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305651258058 0.151781067708 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110950295668 0.0609392437508 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.0 Out of 90
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