It is argued that getting married before finishing school and getting job is not a good choice. Do you agree or disagree?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals marrying and doing job at early age has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind this trend and the impacts of this phenomenon in the society.
At the outset, numerous factors are associated to marrying and doing job in early age. The most prominent is, one can collect funds for their further studies as some people like to study in high class universities which they do some work during their schooling. What is more, married couple can easily share their emotions and feelings with their partners due to this they can be able to handle their problems by emotional support.
Nevertheless, there are few demerits of this trends which are unavoidable. The first and foremost is, doing job may affect on individuals academics performance as they become rooted to their routine, consequently, they face more and more burden of work and their studies. Needless to say, after married people have to become more responsible as compare to single person which led to lack of family responsibilities in small age. Thus, it is not a good for young ones for married and doing job in early age.
To conclude, I firmly believe, undoubtedly, doing job while studying is fruitful for students. However, getting married is not a good for young ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92712550607 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67682682032 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3862466186 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153583009143 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703264096165 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730550036653 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110224089786 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596838355754 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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