it is foolish to get married before getting education and established . give reasons
In modern era, it is very difficult to get good job at right time, even after higher study. Some people argue that to get married before completion of higher study is totally foolish, whereas other said it should be established. I deem that higher education is very important than marriage and completion of study is utmost important. I will discuss my views in forthcoming paragraphs.
There are number of reasons, why I think that priority should be given to study as compare to marriage. The first and foremost is that individual having age around 20 years do not complete his or her study. So if somebody get married at this time he or she is not able to take responsibility, expenditure of life partner. For instance, if person is not doing any job than he may face trouble related to demands of his wife. Further, young once are not mentally prepare for marriage, but sometime they take this decision only for their family.
The another conducive idea in my mind is that marriage generally bring a plethora of problems for youngster. Namely, after marriage his wife, children need his time, so that they can spend time with him, but due to lot of stress and struggle for getting work may not fulfill this need of family. Lastly, masses should need some time to enjoy life during study and even after some years of it, which cannot possible with early marriage.
To recapitulate, One can say that marriage should be established after proper settlement and getting good job because without it is not right decision. But one can place marriage according theirown way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...mplete his or her study. So if somebody get married at this time he or she is not a...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are not mentally prepare for marriage, but sometime they take this decision onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, so, whereas, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81617647059 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52556136485 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7175924351 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155905079709 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500600253126 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710896238715 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096878442616 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632387621744 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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