It is important to maintain the balance between work and others aspects of one’s such as family and leisure activities. Please give your opinions about how to maintain the balance and why some people think it is hard to do?
One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s world is that in the number of people is believing that maintaining the balance between work and other aspects of life. There is a widespread worry is that this will only lead to a myriad of concern in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that maintaining the balance between work and other activities cannot contribute to better life style, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these advantages stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied area. Besides, when only one can follow such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication, and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of maintaining work and other aspects of life such as family and leisure.
In views of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of maintaining balance between work and personal life are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99616858238 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83529046257 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7372784842 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286551755096 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112331993249 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105165694977 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182232198676 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412424033216 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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