It is important to maintain a right balance of your work and other respects of one’s life such as family and leisure, sport. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Nowadays, the controversial problem with respect to work-life balance can never be ignored. there is an ongoing debate on whether it is important to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of life. From my perspective, I believe it is extremely essential and it is hard to be achieved.
First and foremost, keeping a balance between work and other aspects of one's life is necessary due to the fact that is can increase work efficiency. The reason is that such balance helps people to keep a relaxed mind which people can concentrate more on work. For example, people spare some time for recreation such as seeing a movie will greatly relieve stress during working. Hence, after relaxation, people will devote more to work and the working efficiency will be enhanced.
On the other hand, it is difficult for people to find a balance between work and life because of limited time and energy. Specifically, the burdensome working schedule may account for the majority of the day, leaving little time and energy for other activities. For instance, after long working hours, people who are exhausted would refuse to engage in activities such as going to the club with friends. Therefore, people may fail to maintain a balance between work and other aspects of life.
In a nutshell, having considered all arguments above, we safely reach the conclusion that achieving the balance between work and private life may be essential for better working performance, but it is hard to manage since there is limited time energy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.078125 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62708889635 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52734375 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5116814012 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218856556351 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10225847504 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691502107064 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148883026429 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541587523981 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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