It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree?
We are living in the era of advanced technologies and in this competitive world, it's not at all easy to build an excellent career. Marriage and career are both of great importance in today’s life. With an established career its easy to get settled after marriage and live happily. There are some people who are in favor of getting married in their early 20’s while some advocate about focusing on career first prior to marriage. Before presenting my opinion, I would like to present both sides of argument and then come to a conclusion.
The people favoring the idea of getting married before completing the studies support it with the fact that getting married at the age of 20’s provides the opportunity to study and grow together. 20’s is an proper age to get settled and work together for a brighter future, towards development and success. You will get the whole lot support from your life partner in the studies and eventually help in building a good career.
A partner can lend a helping hand in meeting your responsibilities and duties. In this way you can focus more on your studies and professional life. For example, you and your partner can help each other in the studies and this early age provides you with more time to know each other and build a better future.
In this competitive world, nothing comes easy. Anyone who wants to achieve success and a relaxed life would have to work hard in the right direction while choosing the right path. These days students work harder to make good achievements on grades in order to put a strong base to their professional life. By being successful in career one can live a happy married life.
A whole lot of responsibilities and duties are awaiting to accept after marriage and there is no denial in the fact that life partner and then kids require your time, attention, love and care. While studying and developing career, it would be difficult to provide proper time and attention to the family.
In conclusion, marrying before completing studies and securing a good job give rise to lot of problems including financial, leading to poor standard of living. So it is better to think about getting settled, marriage and having kids after settling down professionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 31.9359605911 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1207.87684729 155% => OK
No of words: 384.0 242.827586207 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 3.92707691288 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68354036468 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 379.143842365 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7774740826 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7368421053 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263546798485 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078331461375 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803404588904 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137797600733 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101431177496 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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