Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
The controversial topic with respect to extreme sports never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether these sports is thoroughly constructive or not. As far as I am concerned, I inclined to believe that extreme sports are beneficial and should be prompted.
First of all, due to the high speed and intensive working environment nowadays, extreme sports could somehow relieve stress after hectic hours of work time which could relax their body and mind. This is to say that they can open avenues toward new achievements in people's career. As a result, their enthusiasm and determination can be amplified. Take bungee jump for example, the majority people could purge their thoughts and vent their feelings after just one round of jump.
Secondly, although some argue that these activities are hazardous and perilous, extreme sports can actually contribute to overcoming difficulties and remaining concentration during high speed circumstance. Because it can not only enhance people's self-esteem, but also according to a research conducted by Yale University, it can strengthen their abilities to make reasonable decisions related to both personal and social. In light of this,
people are more likely to perform up to expectations in society.
To conclude, based on the foregoing discussion, extreme sports are positive activities which have several advantages, especially on mental and physical healthiness due to the fact that it helps people to build their confidence. Therefore, governments and administrations should take actions to promote extreme sport among young generations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54618473896 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99277906041 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670682730924 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.67322266 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177025247912 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703950463902 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625312111582 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101410790482 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064069635184 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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