It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
The controversial topic with respect to raising child never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether it is better for children to grow up in the city than doing this in the country. As far as I am concerned, I tend to agree with the view of raising them in urban areas.
Firstly, there are two most important aspects during children's life, education and health. It is apparently without a doubt that the city can provide children with much significant facilities such as hospitals and schools. Children live in the countryside do not have such access to these utilities of excellent quality. In addition, once children get sick, they could be sent to hospitals in time and receive better treatment. In light of this, children grown up in cities are more likely to be healthy so that it would not have negative impacts on other life aspects.
On the other hand, children who studies in urban schools have higher opportunity to go to universities as many city universities have a large number of places available served for city children while they only provide limited positions for candidates from countryside. What's more, cities have more jobs and higher salary, although the competition is intense, children could strengthen their personal ability through this. As a result, children could make greater achievements during their career and live a better life.
In conclusion, due to the several points mentioned above, I am confident to say that I am in favor of those who support the view that children should be raised up in cities, not only because they have a better educational environment surrounding them, but also they can have a much vibrant life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95804195804 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68379363973 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6070566832 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166636429671 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692117575019 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661027953473 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106972452692 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419546092845 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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