"It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job".
Do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on getting married before the graduation and settlement a stable career can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My opinion is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I strongly agree on completing the studies and joining a reputable career path before engaging to any family commitment.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, having graduation is a significant target, and it should not be disturbed by any other personal commitment such marriage. It is important to note that if any person got married at his early age while being at university, it would be having a direct negative effect on his concentration on the study and would be distracted.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Another pivotal role of the arguments is that involvement in family commitment such marriage is not a wisedecision for students, and a lot of arrangement should be considered before to take such important step. Unless people land in a job with sufficient financial income to cover all marriage obligations, they should not take a step towards it. </p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that students should finish their studies and be employed before their
marriage to have stable family life.<o:p></o:p></p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23076923077 5.00649968141 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.44932821817 2.71678728327 237% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.5024630542 190% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.846313622 50.4703680194 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.0 104.977214359 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.9669160288 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717694201236 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414621650168 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230792551226 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364910479314 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364910479314 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 12.6369458128 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.51 53.1260098522 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.9458128079 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.45 11.5310837438 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.3980295567 169% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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