Some people work for long hours to achieve success and some give importance to free time. compare and discuss these issues.
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on whether working for long hours to achieve the success or to prioritize the free time can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my opinion is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, both sides are significantly important to be balanced.
there are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, some people have their own personal goals to reach higher positions while they are in young age, and they focus only on their work for long hours to meet this target in their organization. it is also important to note that the business market becomes extremely challenging with a lot of complicated tasks; therefore, employees have to spend long hours at their office to ensure that these are adequately addressed and closed before the next day and new duties. therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that long hours are preferred by some workers to meet their own professional perspectives.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that free time is a precious for some people, and they deal with it as one of the untouchable assets of their own daily activities. When the free time is utilized in a perfect way such practicing a sport or enjoying it with their families, employees can perform more effectively on their jobs as a research by a prestigious university in London was published that 90 % of the employees, who enjoy their spare time, have more performance to accomplish their tasks. this exemplifies that spare time is essential for people personality and business life.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that both approaches are important from different aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09030100334 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98310054958 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6906518985 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.2 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281565367369 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103487299428 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710135322872 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143938778982 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711643474669 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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