"It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job".
Do you agree or disagree?
many people get married even before getting settled in their career. this can be seen in many universities and offices. it is argued that getting married while studying or before getting a stable job can be arduous at times. this will be shown by analysing how it can afflict a person’s studies and established employment.
To begin with, the responsibility of a spouse can augment person chores to a greater degree. Say for an instance, a married person has to take out some time for his studies to spend with his spouse, whereas a single person can focus on his studies and has the advantage to score high grades. when looking at this example it is clear that marriage is a hindrance for a student. From this, it can be concluded that it’s better to delay marriage and focus on academics.
Furthermore, initial stages of work life are usually grueling. one has to spend a considerable amount of hours to get established in a good job. For example, a person settling up in a job may have to travel to different locations or branches. If the spouse is dependent, it can be tough to be flexible to cater to the demands of the workplace. when looking at this example it is obvious that it is foolish to get married prior to getting a stable job.
These analysis prove that it’s beneficial to complete studies and have a steady job before getting married. As that adage goes, “a person who chases two rabbits catches none”. In a nutshell, it is recommended that one must first settle in their own life before adding up a responsibility of a spouse
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71480144404 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75629818495 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0341004829 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235485152103 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860538622306 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100774204151 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155866202522 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828467033431 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.