Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development?
Nowadays, people become more aware that the phenomenon of large shopping malls replacing small shops is playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. While some people believe that this change can have beneficial effects on people's lives, others oppose that it may harm the public. In my opinion, large shopping malls taking the place of small shops will be more advantageous in respect of this issue, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.
It is reasonable for me to believe that large shopping malls have more benefits, which is obvious because they can accommodate more different goods. To be more specific, large shopping malls can display many different products in a multi-complex building, so consumers can enjoy the one-stop shopping experience and save many times. To further support the above statement, I can purchase daily necessities and ingredients in a large shopping mall at the same time without going to different small shops several times.
Besides, the second justification for this view is that people will have more opportunities to purchase cost-effective products, which is reasonable because people can have more choices for the same products with different brands in large shopping malls. To illustrate, in large shopping malls, consumers can compare prices and features, then purchase the most satisfactory products. A recent study from Oxford University can prove that 78% of people have a better shopping experience in large shopping centers than in small shops.
In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract public attention, we may safely conclude that there are lots of benefits of the large shopping malls replacing small shops.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, so, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36162361624 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76373664086 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538745387454 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2505319109 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.3 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316361922826 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164111852109 0.0925447433944 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808833631059 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22337781868 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306987318247 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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