Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What's your opinion? Good or bad.
Recently, the phenomenon of large shopping malls replacing small shops has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the replacement of smaller shops by large shopping malls are inevitable, such issue is regarded highly problematic and important by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that smaller shops are still relevant in this day and age, which I will address in this essay.
From a social standpoint, the decisive role of smaller shops providing goods at affordable price has some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that they are built on less expensive property. To stay ahead of the competition, small shop owners provide further discounts to increase sales which not only benefits the owner but at the same time consumers get the products in much lesser price. For instance, smaller shop owners don't higher too much staff for management which eventually leads to less cost of operation. Therefore, smaller shops are still necessary.
Even though people prefer smaller shops, they still go to the malls for shopping and enjoyment. Large malls provide multitude of options to choose from and one stop shop for everything makes this experience better in every way. For example, if a person wants to buy a shirt then shopping malls can provide array of showrooms to select his favorite shirt and that person can achieve this in short span. Hence, shopping malls will gain traction in future.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that local shops plays an important role in keeping the price down and at the same time they shouldn't be replaced by malls.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09057971014 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55700345046 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1306373343 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247254469905 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106754221845 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080029584489 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147465839951 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781847731831 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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