Recently, the phenomenon of law's effects on the behavior of people and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that law can force people to change their acts, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that law can make a good society, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with this viewpoint. At first, the legal society maybe makes living for many people hard as they like to live freely. However, the law can make a policy for society members to reduce crimes rate. For example, driving rules made the streets and avenues safer for people walking.
In addition, using law in daily works can create a bureaucracy in organizations' system that is a disadvantage for the law. But, it can enhance the speed of works in any organization faster. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers has shown that a significant number of governmental systems and organizations in advanced countries benefit from a policy and rules to improve their services.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the law on people's behavior far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94585785679 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9498437242 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268247253449 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973268079792 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563566241408 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15436375342 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654761775828 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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