laws change human behavior?discuss
Human behavior is bound with their natural instinct and feelings to others. However, some people think that human behavior can amend by imposing ample of laws and regimes, while others argue that behavior cannot be changed using limited laws and regulations. I am inclined to believe that law only helps to prevent crime and culprit activities in the human hood, but it is agreed to say that it cannot change human thinking and behavior at certain times. The following paragraphs will analyse the inevitable reasons, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
First of all, laws are assisting/help in preventing criminal activities in every facet of human community. Also, law bonds to/ encourage citizens of a country to act in certain ways by providing a specific list of the rule of codes. For example, a person cannot murder someone because of criminal act 190, in which he has to face death sentence by the power of law. As a result, individuals stop pursuing activities which lead to major and minor offenses, but it cannot change their thoughts.
Second of all, human nature and behavior are inborn qualities, these cannot be changed at any stage of life span, but indeed, it can be controlled using various regulations. For example, Darwin has proved by research that humans have been evolving since past many centuries just only because of their acting, behavior and feelings. Thus, it is certainly true that none of law can stop acting individuals according to their desire into the society.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that, human behavior has strict relation with predefined laws into the society, though; it does not change their way of behavior and thinking according to their beliefs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10104529617 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59503530958 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3283297568 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466702891642 0.242375264174 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161790016432 0.0925447433944 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124235203168 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297075846966 0.151781067708 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107038633093 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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