Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals & Society. To what extent do you agree?

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals & Society. To what extent do you agree?

Its a commom dilemma these days for youth with networking sites, as they are getting crazy for it. Some people believe that social networking sites have negative impact on indivisuals while others material that networking sites are equally important for indivisuals.In thhis essay we will discuss why surfing of social networking sites are important in our lives.

At some point in the near future, social networking sites will lead in all means. This is due to the fact that these days we ar getting ample of knowledge through the same media.For example, Facebook which plays a major role in making people aware about the happenings in the surroundings.It is one of the supersede example which is trendin among the world thses days alongwith entertainment means also.

Despite of many useful advantages of social networking, some people still consider it as wrongly. As per them the social networking sites these days are brain washing the youth of the country. As per them if this treand goes on the youth of the country will vanish and be at a treat of obsolete. This is due to the fact that in this present era, people are misleading by posting crimes like live suicides on the social networking sites.

Social network sites are similar to a coin having both pros and cons at each side respectively, which are becoming part of our lives these days. As a result, we must opt the positive side as it the best option to grasp the updates and knowledge of surrounding.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, while, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8418972332 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58401306682 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0429101216 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215723298288 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850129953889 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748252200682 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12862129604 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564651030332 0.0609392437508 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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