Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals & Society. To what extent do you agree?
In recent years, there has been paramount upsurge in the ongoing debate that social working sites had drastic impact on citizens and prodigies. To some extent it has negative facets. In this essay, I will elaborate both merits and demerits of the advance technology that made easier in communication throughout the world via, social networking.
At the outset, there are multitudes of benefits, firstly, in today’s world everything has become online and having social media the appropriate use of social networking had open the gateways of bright future resulting not only communicating on personal issues, but also cope up in dealing between company’s business. For example, China is using all his resources using the Facebook network through posting, innovated in fast tracking railway system by which not only Africa but Canada, United States are involved in the innovative ways for the growth of their country. Clearly, to say that social networking site such as Facebook in today’s world has become a preponderant site reaching out through people as well as commercial means.
However, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelmed on the potential benefits in using social networking that are escalating using Facebook are leading to threats, violence. For instance, most of the famous politicians hard trying for secure of the nation, they keep on posting about the innocence to be highlighted, but their actual scenario seems to be different, posting and diverting the negative impacts on religious impacts are some of the drastic impacts for which it results in violence, cruelty and blood-shed.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having advantages of socialized networking, but the upsides that can look by the Facebook company to limit and access more securities for better nation which are too great to ignore.
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- Some people think that younger employees often have more skills, knowledge and motivation than the old employees. To what extent do you agree with it? Use your experience. 77
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...gative impacts on religious impacts are some of the drastic impacts for which it results in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86438675256 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.755714324 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.0 104.977214359 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 20.9669160288 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213437650009 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925407120985 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505083981533 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116932803934 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381709200391 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 12.6369458128 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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