Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Nowadays, the impact of surroundings has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "dose it influence?" Although there are some people who argue that the effect of environment is no of high importance, I tend to believe that the opposite is true.
From a social point of view, the effect of regions on successful persons is indeed bound up tightly with middle-class background, which it might lead to both upper-class background and working-class background. For example, a group of reputable social scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between social skills, leadership skills, and achieving goals. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that the success is correlated positively with not only social changes but also effective people.
In educational terms, the impact of regions is undoubtedly attributable to educational progress, in that it would lead to intellectual development, high scores, and family background. A well-known example of such attributions is academic background, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken to take students for granted. Had it provided them with materials in advance, it might have had the opportunity to develop intellect. Thus, surroundings could play an imperative role in acjieveing ends.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the regions could affect success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., the impact of surroundings has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
... leads to a moot question 'dose it influence?' Although there are some people w...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...argue that the effect of environment is no of high importance, I tend to believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62666666667 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29848450049 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7894903688 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136406080629 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055837234818 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716224435266 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102773147666 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731750714972 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.94827586207 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.