Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Several small stores have a tendency to not operate anymore as they are having a difficulty battling with other enormous shops in the place. This phenomenon mainly affects the locality by restricting their chance to earn a living, yet, it could also be develop through administering proper location.
To begin with, consumers tend to purchase products from shopping malls. This holds true mostly in cities that mini-shops are not able to profit. Competitions is on high stake when it comes to availability of products to choose from and convenience. To illustrate this, some commercial establishments have almost all of the products available in one place like SM and Robinsons.
Conversely, the occurrence of this could be compromised by planning where these stalls should be located. The proximity has a huge factor in terms of availability of products where individuals may find easier to purchase from. Besides, the prices of goods in smalls stores are far cheaper than from large ones. As an example, convenient stores from the neighborhood are usually patronize due to its closeness to one's home.
Overall, even though local people would have limit their options to build a business of their own due to competition with huge markets, they could also still manage to venture into it by deciding on the right situated place that the community could easily access from. Indeed, it is always part of taking the risk when into world of business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e commercial establishments have almost all of the products available in one place like SM...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Conversely, the occurrence of this could be compromised by planning where t...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'patronized'.
Suggestion: patronized
...tores from the neighborhood are usually patronize due to its closeness to ones home. O...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ually patronize due to its closeness to ones home. Overall, even though local peo...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'limited'.
Suggestion: limited
...ll, even though local people would have limit their options to build a business of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, if, may, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7462154017 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651260504202 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1671325858 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227151741912 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710515428998 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572566810847 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130906171234 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438444818947 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.