Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
Education play cardinal role in the life of a people. Some people think that education is the third eye of human beings. Nowadays parents send their children far from the house for the higher education. There are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. I will discuss some positives of this trend and the challenges to be over came.
Let’s begin by looking at the positives this topic. One of the main advantage is that students can learn new skills. For example, they can improve the ability to take decisions by their own experience. Moreover they can learn how to manage budget. This will help them in future.
Turning towards the negative side, security of a student is a major issue. They have to take care about their food and clothes. In the absence of the parents they can join bad society, due to this they can take some wrong decision and can make the habit of taking the drugs.
To conclude, education is important for students. They have to weigh up the advantages of decision making and the disadvantages of bad habits. Personally, i believe that the benefits in terms of decision making eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.755 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47951104051 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8647509527 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4375 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.9669160288 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792087265948 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027208454328 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331772750043 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479636777561 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00980309757389 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 12.6369458128 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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