Some people believe that going abroad after intermediate study is an exciting prospect for some individuals, while others think it is likely better to stay home due to the challenges an individual experiences in living and adjusting in an alternate society. Discuss and give your opinion.
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(Q1139) (QT4) (QH6) Question 37 in Part - 1 -- Summarize written text – Item 1
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Summarize written text – Item 1
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Read the passage below and summarize it using one sentence. Type your response in the box at the bottom of the screen. You have 10 minutes to finish this task. Your response will be judged on the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the key points in the passage
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We have two categories of individuals: ones who are aware about their health and other who are deliberate about their beauty. We live in a civilized society where one is evaluated on their appearance and how they introduce themselves. Whereas, few are more worried with their fitness, and handsomeness grasps little or no value to them. I accept that our community is more loveliness intentional then health conscious. Our society is after the absolute body concept, where they would do anything to attain it. There are various quantities of diet charts, and capsules out there, which an individual can intake to get boosted body. Persons disburse more than their entire year’s quality of return and savings to redeem their personality. Occasionally it seems as if, their survival intention in to look and perceive better. Numerous TV shows are developed for those individuals who don’t rebuke to the patterns of society. Beauty and fashion segment is a multibillion dollar enterprise promoted towards the standard attractiveness and trends. Models are a specific weight and they move on the stage to show the entire world that this is excellence and this is how every individual should look like. Updated and most valuable garments, Ornaments and makeup are lay on their body to communicate their statement. If someone cannot execute their absolute body targets, one would proceed to the outstanding of cosmetic or plastic surgery. There is a major part of population who desire to fit in so carelessly due to observing a specific manner, that they obtain drastic quantities into creating themselves notice attraction. This is where crucial health turbulences like anorexia, bulimia and compulsive overindulge disorder enter. It ruins individual’s lives and to some, it approaches to their deaths.
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Try to summarize key points in your own words
(Q1141) (QT4) (QH6) Question 38 in Part - 1 -- Summarize written text – Item 2
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Summarize written text – Item 2
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Read the passage below and summarize it using one sentence. Type your response in the box at the bottom of the screen. You have 10 minutes to finish this task. Your response will be judged on the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the key points in the passage
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Electronic commerce is comprehensive of the entire sales procedure from marketing and sales owing to payment and distribution. There are four fundamental electronic business software assignments. The primary is catalogue demonstration. It can be in a much uncomplicated or very itemized structure of advertise for illustration plenty of photographs of articles with a précised explanation of the product or service with accessibility, inspect features and descriptive options to comprise or to exclude inspect results as well as product number if identified. The second attribute is shopping wagon abilities. This stocks the intelligence about the ingredients a customer has purchased approving them to add and remove articles as they seek. When an individual has completed shopping at a click of a button the components in the purchasing basket can be bought and through to the negotiation platform of the process, the third elementary of online trading. The transaction proceeding stage is the essential checkout. The software evaluates rebate, quantity of order and postage. It is a moment where a deal between the merchant and buyer’s financial computation appears and a safe online disbursement for goods and services takes place. Some programs also entitles supervising so that the client can practically track the consignment at different stages of parcel. Customer relationship software is the fourth vital electronic business software system. Numerous buyers have refers over the surveillance of online payments and it is an important to upgrading the enterprise, developing it more fruitful by attaining buyer behavior. Customer relationship software entitles an organization to become customer-centric in a ever growing rivalry in e-commerce.
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The text offered insight into electronic commerce the auther begin by explaning that there four fundamental of electronic business software assignments which are catalogue demonstration second is shopping wagen abilities the third is elementary of online trading and the last is coustomer relationship/
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(Q1142) (QT4) (QH6) Question 39 in Part - 1 -- Write essay – Item 1
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Write essay – Item 1
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You will have 20 minutes to plan, write and revise an essay about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you develop a position, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 200 - 300 words.
Description
Q:- Some people believe that going abroad after intermediate study is an exciting prospect for some individuals, while others think it is likely better to stay home due to the challenges an individual experiences in living and adjusting in an alternate society. Discuss and give your opinion.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that abroad study is one of the most prominent topic of the contemporary discussion. some people think that it is better to stay home whereas other guess that goining abroad is solution of a problem. In this essay i will discuss this issue and give my own view in my further crumb of writing.
To begin with, in most of the countries like india unemployment is a major issue which give birth to various other problems. After completing their study students are unable to got a good job for their future, due to this they got dipresed and join some bad society and commite srious crimes and create problems for their parents.
No the flipside, there are number of advantages of going abroad, in overseas there is no problems regarding employment. Everyone can get a good job and enjoy their life easly in other nations. The other reason is safety ans securitiey of a person. Thus, this trend is better for the society.
To sum up, i firmaly believe that there are ample of advantages of studyining at home comditio
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, regarding, second, so, then, third, thus, well, whereas, while, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 49.0 10.5418719212 465% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 45.0 8.36945812808 538% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 26.0 5.94088669951 438% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 92.0 20.9802955665 439% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 144.0 31.9359605911 451% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 36.0 5.75862068966 625% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6373.0 1207.87684729 528% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1199.0 242.827586207 494% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31526271893 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.88443534983 3.92707691288 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05618462732 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 545.0 139.433497537 391% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.580463131201 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1943.1 379.143842365 512% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 4.6157635468 520% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 1.56157635468 640% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 52.0 12.6551724138 411% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.139974973 50.4703680194 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.557692308 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0576923077 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 6.9802955665 430% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 2.91625615764 583% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239094849774 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492300756412 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131988334885 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620015524563 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171402520044 0.0609392437508 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 294.0 55.0591133005 534% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.94827586207 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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