Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.
The controversial topic with respect to marriage and career never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether to get married before finding a decent job or not. As far as I am concerned, I inclined to believe that it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, building a relationship with someone before starting a career may lead to several severe problems such as person conflict and financial burden related to responsibility. Because the new couple should be able to handle a variety of small stuff in daily life which could take up a lot of time and energy. As a result, this problem will deteriorate harmony in family.
On the other hand, some also argue that starting a settlement before stepping into the society does have benefits. As both husband and wife can gain courage and motivation from each other, they can consequently focus on their occupation more effectively. Additionally, family members could monitor each other on their study and work. In light of this, marriage can somehow contribute to their future life quality.
In conclusion, due to the foregoing views, marriage and career can influence each other, although sometimes marriage may postpone achievements and career, it is beneficial to health mentally and physically at the same time. The government should promote policy on encouraging marriage when there is enough support.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17543859649 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86123624023 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1097427269 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800889468893 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030372324905 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463140737005 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458463345954 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385839254753 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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