People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about it?
The controversial topic with respect to migration never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on what benefits can people get from moving to big cities. As far as I am concerned, the most important reasons are education and employment.
First and foremost, the most significant one among those top issues is education. As big cities have excellent quality of educational sources, children raised in urban areas are likely to be more possible to get into good universities because those colleges usually have a large number of places reserved for local students while they only offer limited positions to students from the countryside. As a result, children could get better absorption of knowledge.
As the trend of globalization, resources are more likely to be allocated developed areas. There are more firms and companies in in big cities. An increasing demand from employees not only causes enormous job opportunities, but also they are offering a higher salary level than that in rural labor markets. In light of this, with a better life quality and higher career achievement, people will definitely choose to migration to big cities.
To conclude, from all views that have been mentioned above, the major advantages of settlement lie on educational and job aspects. Although there a few of inconvenience such as terrible traffic and environmental pollution, the benefits people get from urban areas are more valuable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, such as, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27038626609 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90318524929 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62660944206 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.502006143 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202368601517 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579604064223 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638740395045 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111076839548 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241850411769 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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