mass media has influence on human, particularly on younger generation. What do you think about it?
In the contemporary era, with technological advancements, the popularity of mass media accelerated around world among people. It changes the thinking process among juveniles. I firmly concur that the means of mass media influence the people’s life and thinking process.
To commence with, numerous people has habit to read newspaper to get knowledge through it as it is one of the fastest method to gain information about world. Secondly, a plethora of adolescents follow mass media to gather information about their favorite celebrities, to cite an epitome, I generally read newspaper come to know about latest trends among famous Hollywood actors to imitate their dressing style. Most importantly, it has become a common habit among people to go out for vacations before checking weather reports on radios and magic box.
Moving further, most of the people utilize mass media to enhance their knowledge in particular fields, for instance, I used to watch idiot box to explore the knowledge about animals as it broadcast myriad programs on it. Besides, today’s generation very keen to listen to radio as a entertainer while driving and in their leisure time. Similarly, mass media assist people to remove their loneliness.
To recapitulate, after analyzing all the aspects, it is apparent that mass media has becoming a crucial part of people’s life as it has plenty of benefits to mankind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...I generally read newspaper come to know about latest trends among famous Hollywood actors to...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eration very keen to listen to radio as a entertainer while driving and in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, secondly, similarly, while, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30357142857 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93526021862 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7703875255 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198601259485 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835096050815 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604962599597 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121568064729 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469947580413 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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