Marketing strategy for big companies should be placed on offer and discounts, and in what ways this can impact on their reputation.
In this day and age, shopping plan have become a controversial debate among public all around the world. Although offer and discount by enourmous factories are regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a considerable number of people, there are number of people hold an opponent's view. I am inclined to highly believe that offer are quite beneficial as they could promot people to perchase new products. For the purpose of this essay, I will illustrate both sides.
To begin with , there are several reason why I support that big componies have to provide customers with offer. First and foremost is that discout can encourage people to buy new products in big shopping centers. For example, a group of researchers in Harvard University undertook a study among firms which give offer to their customers and other ones that never give discount. The result reveald that higher sell's level is positively correlated with higher offer. Individuals who bought componies products which provided offer twice as likely to be happy with their perchases and five times more likely agrred to be constant consumer of that componies.The relation sheep between these two groups was statistically significant. As a result, economic research support the hypothesis that the more offer provide from firms, the more sell rate is.
However, there is no doubt that many factories's offer can provide people with negative points. The componies usually bring products most of them are out of date for usage in malls, so people will buy goods which can not keep in thier houses for long time. In addition to this information, it is strongly claimed that individuals will buy unneccessary products . As a result they will lose thier money. Hence , it is quite clear that offer can cause people spend money on inapropriate goods.
To conclude, while there are several complelling arguments on both sides, my personsl sentiment is that the benefits of componies price reduction far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 324.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16975308642 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68510584788 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5932306826 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167333900585 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531191448252 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301246437868 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084087523849 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526150888693 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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