Marketing strategy for big companies should be placed on offer and discounts? In what ways does this impact their reputation?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in a number of sales strategies such as discounts, offers using in the market. There is a widespread worry that these offers lead item brands to more deterioration. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are number arguments in favour of my stance. the most preponderant one is that most people like to buy cheap goods. Although these are high banded items, many people gain chances to purchase these kinds of bands. Furthermore, this will cause to reduce the value of these goods. Not only do businessmen increase the number of their customers, but they deteriorate the demand of business. Needless to say, these demerits of discounts and offers in the market have a far-reaching impact on their reputation.
Another pivotal aspect of price cut is that customers wait to buy goods until the next special offer time. Moreover, the demand for the specific item and brand will reduce due to the lack of offer. Also, most big brands like Apple, Samsung, and HP do not try to offer discounts because they only focused on their brand keeping prices high at all times. Hence, it is apparent why many are against with the discounts and market offers.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that besides some benefits, the drawbacks of reducing prices and offer high discounts on big brands are too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
... of bands. Furthermore, this will cause to reduce the value of these goods. Not only do b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91869918699 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60537078051 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.975898962 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4285714286 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197113777874 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625015115072 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530248121066 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115441969871 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226516218201 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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